Isolation Rough cut

This is my first cut of Isolation, I realise it's not perfect at this stage, however, as a first cut I am pleased with the result. My actress was fantastic on the day and it shows in the footage, she presented the emotional fear as I imagined, if not better than I could have hoped for.

I am pleased that the film has been shot on the canon 5d as it gives great depth of field and is stunning to look at, I feel it has cinematic feel.

My only concern is the last scene, the reflection shot is an integral part of the film, however, it does not fit with the rest of the footage as well and it was not quite what I had imagined, I am thinking of taking it out to see how it looks, I do think it could work without as it will leave the audience still feeling that the emotional fear of Isolation, lonliness, vulnerable has not been resolved.

Untitled from Laura Wilkinson on Vimeo.

Ellie Goulding 'Your Song'

I have put Ellie Goulding's music video for Your Song on here because I love the lighting and the way it has been shot, I really like the lens flair and some of Ellie's movements and camera movements. I have asked my actress and DOP to look at this for it's stylistic style, however the mood of the video is not what I am looking for.

Cheryl Cole - The Flood

The reason I have looked at this music video is for character mood and the movement Cheryl Cole presents in it. Also it is set by the water which my film will also do so.

Isolated 12th April 2011

Isolated 12th April 2011 by laura-wilkinson

This is the second version which I have tweaked with some of the words, and made the sound better. I have presented this to my peers at university and asked for feedback on how the sound made them feel, The feedback was positive and the audience felt the emotions required.

I will now see how the sound design fits with the film before making any more changes.