Isolation Final

This is the final edit of Isolation, there are only minor changes from the 2nd edit, just tightening the cuts. I did try and play with the last scene (order of shots) after speaking with Laura, but it did not create the narrative in a way I wanted it too. The way it ends is from the girl being completely distraught to calmer and pulling herself together, this reflects the mindset of being trapped and battling with herself and her emotions. It makes more sense to be showing the scene in this way, it adds to the confusion.

Overall, I am really pleased with my conceptual film... I love the way it has been shot and edited, my actress did an amazing job. I feel my narrative has come across well, but still making the audience consider what may have happened to the girl!

Laura Isolation Final

Laura Isolation Final by laura-wilkinson

This is the final sound which will be used in my film, now I have been able to put it to the visual I have been able to get it just right. I realised that the voices were too loud, I wanted them to be more subtle, a whisper, before they were slightly aggressive and did not appear as thoughts as I intended. I also thought there were too may words so I have taken some out. The sound has edited well with the visuals, as each scene changes so does the sound slightly.

This is the second edit of which I have changed the ending, the reflection scene has been taken out, this is because I didn't feel the shots were as strong as some of the others. Also the location looks completely different to the others and I am worried it is too confusing as part of her journey. I have also tightened the shots and rearranged scene three, which I think looks much better now.